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| JainesA98258 | Posted on: 2007/1/19 12:24 |
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beginner poets... I dare you to unleash your talent here.. I am beginning to see a faint light at the end of the tunnel. But to be able to se the light better I need more 'touchlights' and 'companions' so that I can reach the place faster and safers.. Would you take the risk and come join me in providing me the 'torchlight' and 'companions'...The two items here are the poems you can pen down here and with each poem the power to continue the journey to the end of the tunnel will be brighter. Feel free to convey any poem here... After all, what life without love, hate, anger, happiness, etc...
I'll start with a short poem that I have attempted to write: FAKE IT You can fake that smile but You can't fake that face. You can fake Your words but You can't fake that feeling. You can fake that concerned voice But You can't fake your intentions. How far a long more you want to FAKE IT? fake is false fake is fishy fake I say is showing 'coffin face' but still puts on a smile for the whole world to see So I say stop fake, faked and faking it cause all you ever get is F*** IT.... * up to individual choice of words... PEACE JAINE |
| idismail | Posted on: 2007/1/25 23:21 |
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Re: beginner poets... I dare you to unleash your talent here.. Make it, don't fake it
If you do, you might break it There's so much I can take Don't do it, for goodness sake I see through you, don't fake it As clear a view, as I can make it As false as lies, as clear as skies As phony as plastic, you ain't gonna make it Desist, you pretender Your falsehood, just surrender Rid off your make belief Jump off the nearest cliff |
| idismail | Posted on: 2007/1/26 14:01 |
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Wanton Mass Deception - the Bush Doctrine You said it was about W-M-Dees
So we now have 100,000 dead Iraqis They never recovered from your sanctions Nor from your other insidious actions; You said it was about weapons proliferation So you threatened annihilation You took their breath You delivered them death; You said it was about terrorism But we see a front for imperialism To grip the Middle East with an iron claw Never mind the trauma, the turmoil, from the war; You said it was about bin Laden But we were not convinced, nor ardent You humiliated its people They seemed beneath even your spittle; You said it was about democracy But it wasn’t difficult to see In your greed for oil You besmirched Iraqi soil; Your vengeance knows no boundary You blitzkrieged the country You stomped them in their hives You cared not for their lives; What does it take to win the peace? Aren’t you interested in the least? Or will Iran and Syria fall next? Decapitated under your sharpened axe? In all that kitsch, it’s all just pitsch In all that muck, we became schmucks; So tell me what was it really about? But don’t tell me lies about Baghdad. |
| JainesA98258 | Posted on: 2007/1/27 19:36 |
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I think God has Given Up on Us read the daily newspaper What do you see? bombing,killing,raping that goes rapidly by like a humour that deserves no laughing like a song that lyrics are meant not to be sung i said a little pray each day hoping God would listen please make this world a better place but i feel God has move on to something more beautiful,peaceful, and not sinful.... burying our souls thats cold and dark and hollow the time has come but it is hard to say i wish it was simple i am close enough to see we on the other side of the world He's on the other side of the world He has left us with blood in His eyes and I think God has given up on us... |
| wil85 | Posted on: 2007/2/9 9:52 |
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Re: beginner poets... I dare you to unleash your talent here.. pretending to be a real "person" is like running away from being yourself that may be cause by internal nightmare or memory. many of us are afraid of thruth, from the peom it can be studying that the person is lying his/her words everytime but what the writer had just painfull and all what she/his achieve just "nothing" but Fake..
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| idismail | Posted on: 2007/2/17 12:27 |
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One For the Dejects I too do think of you … when my world is blue and my troubled thoughts run riot askew I too do think of you … when I know nought what to do and my worried mind has not a clue I too do think of you … when my debts of emotions are due and the clouds of doubts distort my view I too do think of you … when my joys are few and my fleeting pleasures just upped and flew I too do think of you … when the pain is true and my injured pride doesn't take the cue I too do think of you … when there’s none to coo and the shame evolves with none else to rue I DO think of you But when it gets too rough and I can't hang tough I’ll sue the pants off you Or shout out loud "Screw you! Too!!" |
| redgarfield | Posted on: 2007/2/25 23:01 |
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Re: beginner poets... I dare you to unleash your talent here.. Amoi,
No..,no... I am not going to say another thank you I am going to say glad to meet you glad to be with you glad to be here glad we are here glad we were there glad that january came glad that january we came since then, everything is not the same we too are not the same but we came and met and we are now what we became.
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| hanafee_deangel | Posted on: 2007/3/11 20:58 |
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Re: beginner poets... I dare you to unleash your talent here.. Painted picture...
And the brush kept stroking the canvas, trying hard to paint a picture of you, wanting all the memories that was us, wanting all the dreams that had you.... A picture painted is a picture reserved, because somehow i knew i didnt deserve you, So i now i paint again, with sweat, tears and pain, living life in the fast lane, made me make you look mundane, and for that.... i am sorry... it was never me to say forgive me.... but i now i paint you... hoping your last breath was exhaled when you were thinking of me..... |
| Syamimi137429 | Posted on: 2008/9/4 16:55 |
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Re: beginner poets... I dare you to unleash your talent here.. Missing.
(Dedicated to the lost children of the world.) Did anybody see my heir? Or did I not make myself clear? Bad prediction I really fear, To someone that is dear, The warm I put on hold, Inside of me I let it cold. As times flies, I know my baby cries, Somewhere, somehow in a hollow place, With that scared little face, Escorted by spooky beasts, My baby won’t be at ease. Crown the crowd for the help, Give them a big clap; Cheers to those who rear, In the search of my dear; -Still, it’s a never ending quest, Until then, I shall never rest. The sad song I hum, Pray no harm will come, Before it, I won’t be calm, The feeling just taunt, The lost still haunt, To my dearest heir I hunt. I wrote this thing a long time ago, specially to adik Nurin Jazlin (lost and found) and adik Sharlini( lost and not found). |
| fishtail | Posted on: 2008/10/1 14:13 |
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Re: beginner poets... I dare you to unleash your talent here.. exams...
exams... EXAMS... the word reeks of a freaking bad smell which is slaughtering my poor brain cell and making my life a living hell when the time comes and there rings the bell enter a teacher with hair dripping gel I dunno the outcome but I can tell after this my excuses won't sell And all in all I won't be well |
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